tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8696223264558005744.post3687190704885977052..comments2012-06-03T16:19:33.150-07:00Comments on COCO Whispers: Gold rush gets tarYvettehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/07872462036955652069noreply@blogger.comBlogger1125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8696223264558005744.post-22525043638716749322012-05-16T00:22:10.811-07:002012-05-16T00:22:10.811-07:00"USA" should be "the USA." You..."USA" should be "the USA." Your first two links are to isolated incidents that do not illustrate a larger trend. The link to your block quote should not be in your block quote, but before. Your block quote is from a story that is a month old. Take up the extra lines after it. Attribution should go after the first sentence of a quote. Who is Cleaner? Who is Old Man? These people need names. Thirty should be 30. Capitalise the personal pronoun, and "services( prostitution" should be "services (prostitution."Marc Edgehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00510625002771364258noreply@blogger.com